05/20/2024 The Pains of a Rewrite

Just a short post, but I thought all of you would enjoy this.

This short story is showing its age. Not in being dated, but revealing just how confident I was when I first got back into writing.

It’s painful to look at. Here, so you can join me in my pain.

I really thought I could write a Cockney accent.

It’ll be rewritten and given proper attention. But for the moment, it’s just… eugh.

Stay safe out there, folks. Don’t write like this.

-JB Swift

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Author: Jacob Swift

Swift is a US Postman, writer, RPG player, husband, and father, based in a small town in Louisiana. After ten years of not seeking publication, he’s decided to try again. In the meantime, he works a manual labor job and cares for his family. This blog site is a spot for him to put his notes and thoughts down, as well as brag about his family’s accomplishments.

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